gallery progression, please rape this 1

[nap]

http://naptyme.thesexserver.com/angelique/index00.html

besides no recips at the top(i add them before i submit to each tgp) what is wrong with this gallery? why would it be over looked by a major tgp?

[DaSexi1]

gallery looks ok to me. check the rules carefully for each tgp make sure your following every rule, some tgps don't take interracial galleries. If you keep getting rejected, try something different. change the model, change the sponsor, change the colors and keep trying.

[pine]

Definitely better than your first attempt. Other than the horrible choice of a default font (Times New Roman), have you seen what happens when you view the gallery at 800x600?

...the dreaded "side scroll".

Keep at it, though. :p

[Stylos]

I would probably rate it 4 (5 is max) in our TGP-system at BlackSexPlanet.com.

The gallery is fine, but don´t expect the surfers to read all that text.

Good luck with the galleries.

[james_cmm]

I have no experience submitting galleries however you page looks ok to me.

If it was my page I would go for bullet pointed text that highlights the main focus of the site, rather than writting a book.

Also you could tease the surfer more, you have alot of hardcore for them to get off too before they reach the site. I would use more suggestive pics with maybe one hardcore one at the end, telling the surfer that the real nasty stuff can be seen at the sponsor...